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How much do you need love?
think of someone with nothing there
Think of how it feels inside
and someone who has no one to care
That happiness you feel
is like a void pressing against their skin
The moments that you share
are the tarnish to their tin
They walk each day
a smile brightly plastered on their face
and when they go home at night
they just sit there and wait
Doom is not a good friend
but he comes every night
to sit and talk
for a while
He brings some tea
and thoughts to entertain
like suicide
and cutting pain
and worthlessness
and everything
they do not have
He's like the MOB
he makes you feel good
It’s a comfort to see him
after a while
The loneliness
is just another mile
till it becomes too much
and that last touch of life
goes away
normal people
can’t see you giving up
they see nothing of the change
People who see
see anticipation
but they may not know why
Hearts that are kindred bow gentle
they are too sad to cry
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*sashathefox:iconsashathefox: Aug 11, 2008, 5:58:48 AM
Bad into a depressing phase? Well, it sounds beautiful ^^

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I've witnessed complete silence many times, and it's not silent at all. It's a ringing in your ears that keeps telling you that you're alone.


I suffer from the IWBECWAR (I Want to Beat Edward Cullen With A Rifle) virus.
~Abrainthatleaks:iconAbrainthatleaks: Aug 11, 2008, 2:48:40 PM
Glad you like it :)

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Life is extrodinary in the mind...
Everywhere else you have to settle.
*sashathefox:iconsashathefox: Aug 11, 2008, 2:52:51 PM
^^ I love all of your stuff ^^

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I've witnessed complete silence many times, and it's not silent at all. It's a ringing in your ears that keeps telling you that you're alone.


I suffer from the IWBECWAR (I Want to Beat Edward Cullen With A Rifle) virus.
~Kyrathefox:iconKyrathefox: Aug 13, 2008, 3:35:04 PM
I agree with Panpan it does sound beautiful.

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Pickel on a stick isn't a good thing! It's gross! I tried eating the stick! It dun' work!
~J-Rex1463:iconJ-Rex1463: Aug 13, 2008, 7:53:27 PM
It's deathy beautiful, so much I can relate to in your words. Just the very last part:

Hearts that are kindred bow gentle
they are too sad to cry

I can feel that, picture the emotion of it, paint it all in my mind for I am living that.

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~Kalimey:iconKalimey: Aug 13, 2008, 11:13:40 PM
this really is beautiful, the last two lines really pull the whole thing home. i love your poetry

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Yeah well, Caesar and Marcus were tight, and look what happened to them.
~Rose-Fire:iconRose-Fire: Aug 17, 2008, 1:31:55 AM
wow. thats so good... its so sad. Makes you remember what you don't have....

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I want a mountain lion!
AKA- Edward Cullen.
Edward is mine.
He will come.
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Edwards mine.
So back off I bite.
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If you love twilight, you should join.
~mirrored-disgrace:iconmirrored-disgrace: Aug 18, 2008, 11:20:43 AM
So this describes a lot of me, my past.
Stuff that's close to me.

Very well written, touching and insightful piece.

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xxLee
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